Scary Story

You all know I like my stories short and to the point. I hate pointless long novels like Twilight where it takes like, 12 pages to describe what Bella's wearing or something. Well, I was on Quizilla

and I was browsing some stories to read to improve my writing skills and I came across this one:

Click here for the story!

I usually don't like scary stories, but this one was pretty interesting, and I think it was written by my cousin (the username's familiar). Anyways, I hope you guys check it out, and post a comment telling me what you think. PS: Should I write a story?

 

Yours till the bumble bee's,